Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Story: War Diary of a Monkey Soldier

The Battle of Lanka (c. 1650). Painting by Sahibdin.

I was there on that dreadful day when Ravana defeated Rama. No one expected this. We knew that the battle would ebb and wane at times, but we were too confident to consider the possibility of losing. Rama had won every one of his battles thus far and there seemed little chance of his losing this one. Oh, if only we hadn’t so much pride! We would have seen just how powerful Ravana and the rakshasas were. They outnumbered us and had strong fortifications to hide behind. It seems strange that I should have remained so enthusiastic in such obviously hopeless conditions. And all this for Rama’s wife. I wonder if Rama would have bothered if he hadn’t Sita to rescue. Would he have thought this battle worthwhile in any other condition?

Of course, hindsight is always 20/20. Rama had beaten all kinds of foes, whether large or small. He had defeated rakshasas single-handed before. With an entire army backing him up, there seemed little question that he could dominate any foe. We may, indeed, have won, if not for the tricky and dishonorable manner in which Ravana and his army had fought. They knew they couldn’t face us head on. A thousand dead rakshasis testified to that.

So, rather than surrendering or fighting until their honorable deaths, they sent out Indrajit to cast his magic spells and wreak havoc on our forces. Using his terrible magic, he turned himself invisible and cast thousands of arrows at Rama and Lakshmana. By these tactics, he was able to bind Rama and Lakshmana and inflict on them many wounds.

How had we not seen this? How had we forgotten the trickery of the rakshasas? When had they ever won against an army by numbers alone? We were blinded by pride and rage. Our leaders were supposed to account for all of the rakshasas’ trickery. We put so much confidence in them, only to have them fail us.

There can be little doubt that many more would have died if our armies hadn’t retreated back over the water. Here, we nurse our wounds and hope that our leaders produce a better battle plan. It’s been several weeks and though all of our soldiers have been brought back to life by Hanuman and the magic herbs from the mountain, our generals still haven’t produced a plan. I wonder if we’ll ever cross the water again. Most of the men seem ready to pack up their stuff and head for home. I don’t blame them. The harvest is drawing near and my family needs help.

In addition, once he’s organized his forces, Ravana may soon come across the water. He can’t be satisfied in simply repelling us. Rama is his greatest enemy. Surely, he wishes to defeat him permanently. I can only hope that Rama and Lakshmana regain a reasonable amount of confidence and form a plan of attack that takes into account the trickery of the rakshasas. They risk losing the support of their soldiers, their citizens, and even the gods if they continue like this!

I beseech all of the gods to help us in this worthy task!


Author's Note

While reading of Rama's temporary defeat at the hands of Indrajit (link to the PDE version), I began to think about how much the story would change if Rama had really been defeated. In the original story, this is only a setback. Like the rest of Rama's battles, he eventually comes out on top. His status as a hero often seems to prevent his from ever being defeated. I wondered how his subjects would react to an actual defeat. It's been interesting writing a narrative that conflicts with the heroic image of Rama presented in the Ramayana. Like much of history, certain accounts are swept under the rug.


Bibliography

Various authors. Ramayana (public domain). Source.

Monday, September 5, 2016

Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana, Part D

"Rama meets Bharata."
Illustration by Raji Ravi Varma. Link.

61. The Bridge
Like the beginning of the epic, the gods are bound to rules greater than themselves. What other rules could prevent them from helping Rama?

62. Rama Attacks
Ravana has too much pride. His overconfidence will lead to his demise.

63. Indrajit
What would have happened if Rama had completely lost the battle? Imagine a situation in which Rama must retreat from Lanka. How would he be received?

64. Kumbhakarna
Why was the monster able to be awakened before his time? What sort of curse is this that can be broken?

65. Hanuman and the Mountain
Extreme emotions lead to extreme strength. The heroes gain powers only when they most need them, apparently.

66. Lakshmana and Indrajit
You would think Rama would never trust the rakshasas. The rakshasas are always shown as fighting in tricky or dishonorable ways. They rarely fight in a straightforward manner.

67. Ravana's Lament
Even the "rakshasa dames" have a code of honor. Are the rakshasas more of a race of assorted deities rather than inherently evil beings? What could have been said between the rakshasa dames before Ravana came to get Sita?

69. Indra's Chariot
Rama is again receiving celestial weapons from the gods. The importance of the god's help in all endeavours.

71. Ravana's Death
Ultimately, Rama's power resided in the gods and their gifts. How would Rama thank them?

72. Mandodari's Lament
Even Ravana is given a warrior-king's funeral. There is a level of respect between the two sides that overcomes all (or most) antagonism. What could have been said between the two sides after the battle but before the funeral? Would they have discussed treaties and issues of Lanka's kingship?

73-74
Sita and Rama have been apart so long that there is some emotional distance between them. Does Rama not trust Sita that much? Actually, Rama was only making sure his subjects knew of Sita's purity and worthiness.

76. Rama and Bharata
How has the kingdom fared while Rama was in exile and during the battle? How would a simple villager view the return of Rama? Would he be welcomed with open arms or would the villager distrust someone who lacked experience in ruling the kingdom?

79. Sita Departs
Sita is having a rough go of it. Why don't the people of the kingdom accept Sita's fidelity? Why do they celebrate their king and yet not trust his belief in Sita's purity?

80. Rama Departs
Rama has ruled for a long time. How would the reunion between them have gone?


Bibliography

Various authors. Ramayana (public domain). Source.


Sunday, September 4, 2016

Reading Notes: PDE Ramayana, Part C

Painting of Hanuman (c. 1700). Artist unknown. Link.

41. Sugriva and Hanuman
Why did Hanuman feel the need to disguise himself? Does he wish to test Rama's treatment of the lowliest people? Consider the conversation between Sugriva and Hanuman about this disguise.

42. Sugriva's Story
What if Sugriva is lying? Consider a story in which Sugriva really did try to kill Vali and steal his throne.

43. Vali's Death
Rama may be opportunistic in his comradeship with Sugriva. He may be using the Sugriva's help to retrieve Sita, whether or not what he does to other people is right. Given this, what sort of internal conflicts would Rama experience?

44. King Sugriva
Sugriva seems genuinely heartbroken in having killed his brother, Vali. What sort of tensions would arise as a result of this killing? Surely someone will refuse to accept this killing as justified.

47. The Armies
Sugriva needs to be threatened to follow his promise. Yet another sign that he lied about why he had filled in the hole and so trapped Vali.

49. Sampati and Jatayu
Once again, brothers experience hardship. The importance of family is made clear throughout the whole of the Ramayana.

51. Hanuman in Lanka
Sita has sacrificed many worldly comforts until she should be reunited with Rama.

54. Hanuman and Sita
Once again, Sita sacrifices (possibly) certain escape in order that Rama should rescue her. Would Hanuman and Sita have escaped if they had actually tried together? What would Rama think about this?

57. The Burning of Lanka
This seems to be one of the only instances where a protagonist or hero regrets their actions. Hanuman displays a certain rashness in his revenge. What would have happened if Sita really did die?

Sections 59-60
Hubris will likely prove the demise of Ravana and of his followers. Rather than being reasonable and giving up Sita, they seem more intent on spilling blood. Would Rama have let them go if they had simply given up Sita?


Bibliography

Various authors. Ramayana (public domain). Source.