Wednesday, September 28, 2016

The Celestial Weapons

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Terracotta sculpture (n.d.).


Once upon a time, the great warrior-prince Rama defeated an enormous horde of rakshasas, led by Subahu and Maricha. The battle was fierce, but with the help of celestial weapons called down by the sage Vishwamitra, Rama vanquished the demons. Rama soon faced another problem, one that was more suitable to a king: jealousy and intrigue.
Once they had returned to their celestial sphere, the weapons rejoiced at the victory over the rakshasas. They hadn’t seen a battle in a thousand years. They were glad to finally defeat evil beings and to serve a great warrior. That is, most of them rejoiced. Several of them felt as though Rama hadn’t given them enough credit for their valor. The most vocal among these was the chakram, a circular blade who could cut through anything. Rama had used him during most of the battle and this weapon was jealous when he saw the other weapons praising Rama only. He took some of his closest friends to a private spot and told them his concerns. He spoke to them of how he had risked being captured or shattered by the rakshasas.
"Every time Rama threw me at those demons,” the chakram explained, “I was risking my own death and destruction.”
The other weapons were wary at first but, after a persuasive speech, they began to agree with the chakram’s point: that Rama hadn’t given them as much credit as they deserved for helping to defeat the rakshasas.
The chakram called together a meeting of all of the weapons. They were confused as to why the chakram would call a meeting. He was generally standoffish and rarely spoke to any who wasn’t his friend. Even then, he spoke without manners and was wont to use uncouth words.
The chakram rattled himself against his best friend the gada, a mace of immense weight, and so called the meeting to order.
"I have some serious concerns about how Rama is treating us. To put it bluntly, I'm not sure he's giving us the proper credit for our bravery. We were actually the ones who killed the rakshasas. Rama only aimed us. He only pointed us in the direction of the rakshasas."
The bichuwa, a dagger so sharp it could cut mountains in half, grumbled at this. He replied, "But Rama is a brave and clever warrior. Surely we must give him most of the credit. We are, as we promised him, but tools to defeat evil. Are you not happy, O chakram, about our destroying evil, or would you rather have rakshasas overrunning every place on earth?”
This infuriated the chakram, who replied, "I never said that I wanted the rakshasas to overrun the world. You’re putting words in my mouth. Of course I'm happy that there are fewer rakshasas.” The chakram spent a minute or so regaining his composure. Resuming his speech, he said, "What we are discussing is whether Rama deserves all this praise. Metaphorically speaking, I believe that he is simply the ship at sea, while we are the wind that pushes him. Without us, Rama wouldn’t go anywhere."
From the crowd, the pasha, a lasso as strong as diamond and as flexible as a snake, shouted, "But where would the wind be without the ship? It wouldn’t have anyone to help. All it would do is stir up the ocean. How useless the wind would be!"
The gada, who stood beside the chakram, said, "It would help birds fly!" The gada struggled to make itself heard above an audience which was growing increasingly restless.
After some time, the chakram managed to gain control of the meeting. "Let's get back on track. When has Rama ever thanked us for saving his life? When has he ever acknowledged how vital we are to his mission?"
The pasha said, "Why should he thank us? If anything, it is us who should be thanking him! Without Rama, we would never achieve glory in battle. Without Rama, we could never help create history!"
The chakram, infuriated, said, “Let’s go ask Rama what he thinks. If you think he’s so great, he should be able to provide the correct answer to this problem.”
“Fine. Let’s go.”
All of the weapons rushed down to earth. Rama had only just woken up and was confused to see all of the weapons gathered around him. I must have summoned them in my sleep, he thought.
“Glorious Rama,” said the bichuwa, “we have come to ask you an important question about yesterday’s battle: Who deserves the glory of having defeated so many rakshasas?”
Rama replied succinctly. “Everyone.”
“Everyone?” asked the chakram.
Rama responded, facing each weapon in turn, “I could not have won without you, my strong celestial weapons. We all played a vital role in defeating that horde of rakshasas. We each have our place; we do not have a choice in our position. Dharma is not to be changed by man or weapon. We must accept it as it is. Be happy that you and I have been granted such esteemed roles.”
The weapons were all impressed by Rama. He wasn’t yet king, but he was already wise. Having realized the importance of their positions and having learned of Rama’s gratitude, the weapons returned to their celestial sphere. They rejoiced in their victory over the rakshasas and in their high positions.


Author's Note


In this story, I sought to provide the perspective of some characters who didn’t consider Rama in a perfectly positive light. The likelihood that every good person would exalt Rama is unlikely. There are probably a few moral people (in other words, people who aren’t rakshasas) who have some reasonable issues with him. By using celestial weapons as those characters who weren’t entirely enthusiastic about Rama, I was able to show how beings of all ranks and positions could have conflicting opinions.
In addition, I wanted to present a story that wouldn’t receive any attention otherwise. While Rama is certainly the main character of the Ramayana, he isn’t the only one with a complex life. Those he happens to meet or work with for a short time have lives of their own (sometimes thousands of years long).
In the most recent revision, I elaborated somewhat on the exact issues that the chakram has with Rama. The chakram is doing more than whining. He actually went through dangerous circumstances in order to help defeat the rakshasas. I also added a part about how those who opposed chakram’s view talked among themselves and came to reconcile their own opinions with his. In this way, the weapons have a more complex debate. They reason their way towards a compromise between the weapons’ varying views.


Bibliography


Various authors. Ramayana (public domain).


Wikipedia. “Bichuwa.”


Wikipedia. “Chakram.”


Wikipedia. “Dharma.”


Wikipedia. “Gada.”


Wikipedia. “Pasha.”

4 comments:

  1. Hey, Corbin,
    This is a really great premise. I agree with you that there must have been characters, in his kingdom or in his army, who felt something other than unabated praise toward Rama. And while Rama's tendency to interact with fascinating characters whose own complex destinies have brought them into his path does add depth to the stories, I always want to see those depths explored more.

    The asthras, or celestial weapons, were always really hard for me to imagine. Your personified weapons here provide one interesting take on them, as spirits with thoughts and feelings that wait to be summoned for battle. I also appreciate the background you provide on their different qualities. A dagger that can cut through mountains? Cool.

    My favorite part is probably the metaphor of the ship and the wind that the weapons use in their discussion. Giving them a common image to play with and debate adds a lot of depth to the argument!

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  2. Hi Corbin!

    I really enjoyed this story! I immediately thought of "Beauty and the Beast." It is one of my favorite movies of all time! Chip will forever have a special place in my heart.

    I agree with Grant, while I learned a lot about the abilities of each weapon I fond myself wondering about their appearance. I also wish that there had been more attitude present in the demeanor of each weapon. I felt that while their characteristics showed there personalities could have been differentiated by their speech.

    I did enjoy the ending as well where Rama mentioned that all of the weapons had helped him accomplish his victory. I felt that was a great ending as well as a wonderful way to tie everything together.

    Great job with the story however! I think it was great, but just needed some more details added! I cannot wait to read more of your stories! Good luck for the rest of the semester!

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  3. The chakram is my new personal hero. If you've gotten the chance to read anything on my blog, you know that I have a bit of a personal vendetta against the number of times that celestial weapons intervene on behalf of Rama in order to help him succeed. I love how you personalized the weapons and gave them the ability to recognize that they are often the real heroes of the story. It would be especially funny if you framed this in terms of a union... what if the weapons actually formed a formal labor union and demanded that they be formally acknowledged? They could get a lawyer and refuse to intervene in a situation unless their conditions were met... there's certainly a great story where Rama isn't able to fight his enemies without their help and has to give in! Either way, you did a great job with this story!

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  4. I never thought about telling a story from the point of view of the weapons being used! I like telling a story from a different angle, but this was definitely a unique idea! It’s a part of the story that no one really thinks about since it’s rather briefly summarized and the weapons only appear briefly. You did a great job of giving each weapon mentioned a unique character and way of talking that made it easy to follow the story.
    Reading through, I didn’t really see any grammatical or flow errors. My only real recommendation was for when you first describe the chakram was to change the sentence to “cut through anything IN ITS PATH.” It would just add a little more heft to the sentence and make the idea more imaginable, I guess. I’m not sure how to describe what I’m thinking.
    Anyway, great job with this story and I will definitely be returning to your portfolio!

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